Conrad Rice

Let's keep this thread for reviews, guys. If you want to talk this over, take it to private messages.

For future reference, this story is based off of the events of the Battle of Ramree. It does not take place in Japan itself, so that might explain the crocodiles ...

Hi lakegirls! I'm here to take a look at this second half. It's an all right second half. While it is put together rather well, it feels like it is ...

I do love this! All these songs are so wonderful. :)

Wonderful. :) I'll have to win one of your contest again sometime. :)

Okay Ky, I just went over your revised Evergreen. I have to say that I prefer the old version to this one. This version seemed too long and clunky for ...

Aw, you made me pretty! Thanks! :) Awesome job, Angel.

I'm glad you two liked it. I was very proud of both of your parts. I hope you're okay with the literary representations of your digital selves.

Hey, got my critique done today! Sorry, it's kind of a little short. And a little mean too. I must say though, this story is turning out to be even ...

Hmm, I am back to see about the two things you want answered here. 1. I understood that the girl left and died, but I might have understood that only ...

Wells, I took a look at it again. I didn't see a lot of things that you haven't fixed, so I'll go on and try to help you out on ...

As far as making it clearer that Austin did not kill anyone, you may want to say something to the effect of it all being just a thought. I would ...

This is good. There's not really much more I can say about this, other than it shows that you have a lot of ability and that if you cultivate it ...

Reviewing part two now. :) For the record, I always thought works like this were dystopian satire. I see I have homework to do. :( I have to bring up ...

One last bit of news pm this old thing. It didn't win the contest I put it in for, boo hoo. Oh well, such is life.